I like how you have said which target audience this magazine would apply to most because it gives you something to focus on thoroughly whilst creating your magazine. You have also mentioned what you aim to make your magazine layout look like. This is effective as readers can decide weather it will appeal to them or not. Overall i enjoy how much detail your 25 word pitch is because it makes it easier for you in the long run. I would pay £3.00 for your magazine. To improve, state what you intend to do to ensure these groups read your magazine.
Thank you for your comments. After reading through your thoughts and analysis I have decided to take your advice into consideration. Firstly, I find your thoughts on pricing extremely useful as I feel that you have stated an extremely valid point and one which I will consider whilst pricing my magazine. I will also consider your advice on how to improve my 25 word pitch by stating what I intend to do to ensure my target audiences reads my magazine.
I Like how you have made your target audience clear, and that you have used images and words. I'd pay £2.00 for your magazine, it would be more if i was male. To improve you could add some coloured text to the pitch to make the words stand out and it more interesting for the person watching.
Thank you for your comments. After reading through your analysis i have decided to take your advice into consideration. Firstly, i find your advice on pricing extremely useful and will compare it with my other comments to then decide on the final price of my music magazine. I will also consider your advice on how to improve my 25 word pitch by adding coloured text to make it more visually entertaining.
I like how you have said which target audience this magazine would apply to most because it gives you something to focus on thoroughly whilst creating your magazine. You have also mentioned what you aim to make your magazine layout look like. This is effective as readers can decide weather it will appeal to them or not. Overall i enjoy how much detail your 25 word pitch is because it makes it easier for you in the long run.
ReplyDeleteI would pay £3.00 for your magazine.
To improve, state what you intend to do to ensure these groups read your magazine.
Thank you for your comments. After reading through your thoughts and analysis I have decided to take your advice into consideration. Firstly, I find your thoughts on pricing extremely useful as I feel that you have stated an extremely valid point and one which I will consider whilst pricing my magazine. I will also consider your advice on how to improve my 25 word pitch by stating what I intend to do to ensure my target audiences reads my magazine.
ReplyDeleteI Like how you have made your target audience clear, and that you have used images and words. I'd pay £2.00 for your magazine, it would be more if i was male. To improve you could add some coloured text to the pitch to make the words stand out and it more interesting for the person watching.
ReplyDeleteThank you for your comments. After reading through your analysis i have decided to take your advice into consideration. Firstly, i find your advice on pricing extremely useful and will compare it with my other comments to then decide on the final price of my music magazine. I will also consider your advice on how to improve my 25 word pitch by adding coloured text to make it more visually entertaining.
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